育才学习网1. 请帮忙修正英文作文
In my opinion, hobbies are activities or interests pursued outside one's regular occupation and engaged in primarily for pleasure. Besides, they are also known as spare-time recreational pursuits.
Hobbies are very important part in our life. They can take us out of our life for a while. To our knowledge, we can know that hobbies are benefit activities to us and also good for our health. If someone dislike outdoor activities under the hot summer day, one can choose indoor games such as table tennis, badminton, chess and so on. Otherwise, if someone is interested in sports, one can take part in outdoor games such as football, basketball, volleyball and others. In addition, hobbies can prevent the harmful effects of stress and also make our life richer and more rewarding. We face a lot of stress in our work or study. So that, we choose a best way to reduce it.Hobbies can bring our life more fun. Futhermore, hobbies make our life more relaxing, energizing and meaningful. Why do we say that? Because it is a way that always let us release tension and keep our mind sharp. We will find lots of happiness and keep broad-minded as we can meet many new friends through it. Moreover, we feel more confident as our talents expressed.
Why we need hobbies in our life? Hobbies have more advantages than disadvantages. People who live in the city almost spend their whole days and spirits on work or study, they seldom take part in exercise. They think exercise are wasting their precious time and (become day to day不知道想说什么)， illnesses such as overweight and diabetes become more and more severe（形容词后面不能空着）. That is why we need hobbies to (prevent our) stay health. The saying goes like "work hard, play hard". We need to pay hard to work or study so that we can success in our future, but also need to play hard so that we can have a regular life.
2. 修改的英文写法
revise
vt
revised, revising
校阅；校订
He was revising what he had written.
他正在修改他所写的东西。
修正；改变
I'll have to revise my ideas about Tom.
我必须改变对汤姆的看法。
Modify
更改；修改
The equipment may be modified to produce VCD sets.
这设备可以经过改装用来生产光碟机。
缓和；减轻；使易接受
to modify one's demands
使达成协议
修饰，限制（意义）
Adjectives modify nouns.
形容词修饰名词。
3. 修正英文邀请信
Invitation to Our New Product Release Conference
May 1st, 2008
Dear Mr. Pan Zi You,
May we have the honour to request your presence at our “ Release Conference on New Product xxx” which will be held at 9 pm, the 5th of May, on the 3rd floor of Zhongyu Hotel, KunMing. Lunch will be served after the conference. Looking forward to kind attendance.
Sincerely yours,
Oriental Company
4. 急求翻译并帮忙修正一篇英文自我介绍~
Good morning/afternoon/evening everyone! I'm so glad to meet all of you here and introduce myself to you. My name is 。
,from Zhengzhou.It's a prosperous and friendly city;welcome you here. I hope we would spend a good time here together in the coming semester.Thank you,thank you everybody！（鞠个恭结束）。
5. 升级 英文怎么写
upgrade
英 [ʌp'greɪd] 美 [，ʌp'ɡred]
vt. 使升级；提升；改良品种
n. 升级；上升；上坡
adv. 往上
adj. 向上的
短语
Upgrade Packages 自定义升级 ； 自界说进级 ； 自定义进级
Upgrade Ballista 升级弓箭
industry upgrade 产业升级 ； 产业提升
Online Upgrade 在线升级 ； 线升级 ； 线上升级
Engineering Upgrade 工程升级 ； 工程学升级
扩展资料
同近义词
1、promotion
英 [prə'məʊʃn] 美 [prə'moʃən]
n. 提升，[劳经] 晋升；推销，促销；促进；发扬，振兴
短语
consumer promotion 消费者促销 ； 针对消费者的营业推广 ； 消费者促销管理 ； 消耗者促销
promotion decisions 促销决策 ； 促销决议计划
Internet Promotion 网络促销 ； 收集促销 ； 互联网的那点艺术 ； 网站推广
2、update
英 [ʌp'deɪt] 美 [，ʌp'det]
vt. 更新；校正，修正；使现代化
n. 更新；现代化
短语
System Update 系统升级 ； 系统更新 ； 自动系统更新 ； 系统晋级
Software Update [计] 软件更新 ； 软件升级 ； 软件更新检测 ； 软件进级
6. 翻译修正,谢谢
I just remembered that we would have a day off tomorrow. But I haven't given you the final files.
I am looking forward to your advice for revise. Once you confirme all the information, I will send you the final files.
You don't have to hurry, I can handle this work before this Sunday.
这样好一点了
