1.我用英文简单的介绍了一下自己,请大家帮看看
还是应该再修改一下: My name is dasha.I'm twenty years (year一定要改成years) old.I work at XXX,I'm from (form 改成from,) beijing (in Beijing的in要去掉).I was born on august 5th (5后面一定要加th)。
I enjoy playing football,basketball,music (直接写music就好了,不用加listen to),I enjoy music (一样的,不用加listen to) best (the best 和the应去掉).My favourite composer is huangjiaju.I want to be a (fashion designer前一定要加a) fashion designer.。